I have just been back through your blog to give it a final mark for research & Planning. I am really pleased with the effort you have invested in to your blog to date. keep up the good work.
Current mark: 16/20
Level: 4 (low)
Grade: B+
To improve:
Research section - check the conventions of your genre post / check my feedback to you for this and see if you can develop / make more visual
Planning: Shot lists (use the template I emailed to you)
Shooting schedule: I can see you have uploaded a new one using the school template - make sure you delate the old one you had - stick to having the proper school template there only.
SJA
