Feedback on Research & Planning

Jamal,

I can see that you have come back to some of your research posts and made attempts to improve. This section of your blog is good - but it is not yet complete. You will need to spend another hour or so on the Research section making sure all posts are completed, and completed properly. There's no point taking shortcuts with your blog and cutting corners. This is your coursework, and needs lots of effort from you.

Good effort to get through many posts in the Planning sections, although it's not looking very visual Jamal, and really needs you to include more images if you are aiming for anything C and above.

I will be marking the Research & planning blogs for a FINAL time from Mon 7th Feb - you have some work to do before then;

Research:
Posts 3-4 need doing
Post 10 - Kiss me deadly - not enough written analysis - see my comment on this posts. The set of images you ahave copied in are not from the opening and not relevant. Delete and create your own contact sheet from the opening. Refer back to this in your analysis.
Posts 12 and 13 - you need evidence (visual and written) of additional research into your genre)
Post 14 - needs to be visual - spend time taking screen grabs from a range of your fav thriller films - make a visual collage toe SHOW rather then TELL the key conventions - with annotation.
17 - Sort out the proper questionairre - upload
18 - read my comment on this post - you need to say how you plan to use these results, otherwise I will assume they are just charts that you completely made up without bothering to survey your target audience at all...

Planning:
1 - Could be visual
3 - still to do
4 - Your links to sound do not work - fix
6 - needs pics
8 - You need to use proper template from Frog
9 - needs pics
10 - pics

SJA Feb 3rd